It’s been a while since my last post. With holiday travel, cooking and cards, there just wasn’t time to paint. Now I’m back and determined to finish this painting so I can start on something new!
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Tryptophan
With Thanksgiving tryptophan coursing through my veins, I headed into the studio for few more hours of painting. Here’s how it looked when I started:
First order of business was to paint the front edge of the table. Then I reworked the red cloth:
By the end of the weekend I managed to add shading and highlights to the pear:
Fixing Shadows
The evening I worked on the table top and the shadows. Here’s how the painting looked when I started:
Here it is at the end of the evening:
Specific changes:
- Darkened back left of tabletop to help emphasize the pool of light in the front.
- Darkened back right corner of tabletop.
- Softened rear table edge center and right.
- Moved the shadows of the wine glasses to be consistent with a single light source.
- Adjusted the shapes of the wine glass shadows.
- Painted decanter shadow.
- Extended shadows from tabletop onto red cloth.
- Adjusted bowl shadow.
- Painted over some sanding marks.
Reimagining the Background
This evening I reworked the background (again). Pictures below show before and after.
This time I used bigger brushes to get a smoother gradient and I played around with putting more color into the background. The new background has neutral grays along with slightly violet and slightly green grays. I am hoping these will work well with the red in the cloth and the color of the wine.
Reworking the Background
Dry Red Wine
One of the many hazards of still life painting is spoiled, rotting subject matter. I started my “Wine and Apples” still life exactly two months ago. About two weeks after setting up the tableau, the fruit flies arrived. After three weeks, even the fruit flies were dead. Today I thought it might be a good idea to clean and replenish the wine glasses. Imagine my surprise when I found this gooey red wine reduction in the glass. I could probably mix it with some linseed oil and use it for painting.
What Have I Done?
It’s always darkest before the dawn. At today’s group crit, Gary pronounced my “Apples and Wine” painting all-but-done, needing only some detail work. He predicted that I would be finished by Thanksgiving.
After class I took a sanding block to the canvas to remove some of the more offensive, ham-handed strokes. It now looks like I took a huge step backwards, but the sanding was a necessary step in creating a finished piece that I will be proud of. With the bad strokes out of the way I am now free rework the background, tabletop, and cloth, before heading into the home stretch.
I wrote a note to myself with the list of remaining work items. I am expecting that I will now work through this list, crossing things off one by one while refraining from adding new items. The end really is in sight and I am already planning for my next painting.
Bundle
This week’s word is “Bundle”. Manet’s painting, “A Bunch of Asparagus”, immediately came to mind so I headed to my local produce department for some baby asparagus. To reinforce the theme of “bundle”, I included a second bundle, this one consisting of eleven new yellow pencils. I chose the pencils because they were roughly the same size and shape as the asparagus but lent a complementary color. My hope was that viewers would see the juxtaposition of the pencils and asparagus and immediately see that the commonality was the bundling.
I couldn’t resist a little art history joke. The picture below is an homage to Manet’s “L’asperge”. Here’s the story as told by the Musée d’Orsay:
Manet sold Charles Ephrussi “A Bunch of Asparagus” for eight hundred francs. But Ephrussi sent him a thousand francs, and Manet, who was a master of elegance and wit, painted this asparagus and sent it to him with a note saying: “There was one missing from your bunch”.
At today’s crit, I hung a few bundle ideas on the easel, returned to my seat, waited a moment, then said, “there’s one missing from the bunch” and produced this final image.
Drawing Reestablished
Today I finished adjusting the ellipses so that the painting has a consistent eye level. I think the shapes are good enough to proceed, but it is amazing how many things I can find to fix. It seems the longer you look at a painting, the more problems you find. Not really sure how you know when you are done.
This painting still has a way to go. First, I want to sand off some ugly brush strokes in the background and on the cloth. Once I’ve done this, I plan to repaint the gradients in the background and on the table top to be more dramatic. On the table, especially, I want to emphasize the pool of light on the left, while adjusting the shadows to be consistent with a single light source. Once I’ve done that, I will finish up the folds and shadows on the cloth and paint the narrow line of shadow under the left side of the cloth. Then I’ll do the reflections on the bowl, finish the fruit, and finally add specular highlights.
The end is in sight, but I still probably have a couple of weeks to go.
Severe
This week’s Word-of-the-Week is “Severe”. I considered severe weather, with a falling barometer on a window sill with coast guard weather flags flying in the distance against a blood red sky and I thought about a severe snow storm with snow drifting against the window sill. I also considered a severe cliff face and a severe hair style, but in the end settled on severe looking shards of broken glass that could make severe cuts.
I headed to the grocery store with the idea of a broken bottle base with sharp fingers pointing skyward, like a bombed out cathedral from World War II or the outer shell of the World Trade Center after 9/11. I had a bit of trouble finding glass bottles – nearly everything is plastic now. Thank god for Mexi-Coke.
Here’s one of the images I presented in class.
Gary picked up a brush and with a few carefully placed strokes, put my bottle shards into orbit around the Earth with the moon shining above. I really like the idea and am hoping to paint it soon.